A Mouse’s Tale

A Mouse’s Tale

A Mouse’s Tale

In a quiet nook of Fox Hollow, nestled beneath the roots of a timeworn oak tree, lived a mouse named Peter Proud Foot. His fur was soft and gray, and his feet—his most defining feature—were unusually large for a mouse. They gave him a confident gait, and a name whispered with admiration throughout the Hollow.

One chilly morning, Peter discovered a torn letter lodged between the roots of his tree. It read:

To whoever finds this — beware. The Raccoons of the East have stolen the Moon Charm. Without it, the forest will darken forever.

Signed,

Old Sage Myrtle

Peter’s whiskers twitched. He knew of the wicked raccoons—legend said they ruled the forest’s farthest edge, a place even owls dared not fly. But it wasn’t just fear that settled in Peter’s heart. It was duty.

“I must go,” he whispered.


And with nothing more than a satchel of breadcrumbs, a woolen, hooded cape and an acorn walking stick, Peter Proud Foot stepped away from home.

His journey was long and laced with wonder.

In the thickets of Bramblebrush, Peter met a grumpy wizard toad named Thistledrum, who brewed dreams in teacups. Thistledrum offered Peter a vial of Whisperwind, a potion that let him run like the breeze— “Only when the forest grows still,” the toad warned.


Further along, Peter entered the Misted Hollows, where he found a grove of glowing mushrooms. There, he encountered a ghost mouse named Bellamy, who had once tried to defeat the raccoons and failed.

“You must take the Backward Path,” Bellamy intoned. “Time flows strangely there, but it’s the only way to reach the raccoons unseen.”

Peter bowed. “Thank you. I’ll finish what you started.”

The Backward Path was bewildering. Trees walked in slow spirals, the sky blinked like a sleepy eye, and memories whispered from the shadows. Yet Peter pressed on.

At last, he reached the land of the wicked raccoons.

The moon never shone there. The sky was dim, choked by clouds that curled like smoke. The raccoons, with their ringed eyes and cruel smirks, guarded a great silver orb—the Moon Charm—in a black stone tower.

Peter, using the Whisperwind potion, dashed unseen past guards and scaled the tower walls. Inside, the Moon Charm sat on a pedestal, pulsing with cold light. As he touched it, a wind howled through the chamber.

The raccoons came.

Peter’s heart raced. But just as the raccoons lunged, time reversed—the Backward Path had followed him. The tower crumbled in reverse, and Peter, Moon Charm in paw, fell back through time, back through mist and grove, thicket and leaf, until—

He landed gently in front of his tree in Fox Hollow.

The moon shone bright overhead. Birds chirped. A single leaf drifted lazily down, as if no time had passed at all.

Peter blinked. The Moon Charm now sat on a nearby stone, humming gently. It was safe.

He chuckled to himself. “Well,” he muttered, brushing off his scarf, “perhaps my feet were made for more than just walking.”

And from that day forward, tales of Peter Proud Foot grew longer, braver, and more unbelievable with every telling.

But the moon, above all else, never stopped shining.

The End. 🌕🐭✨

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1 comment

I was intrigued. As I read this facinating tale. Wishing I had saved it until bedtime instead of greedily reading it during lunch. I would have enjoyed comforting dreams😴

Pamela Lucas

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